For many collegians, they are tending tolive in a rented flat when they are in university in order to have morepersonal space. This situation has attracted many people’s attention. Somepeople support the previous ideas for they are convincing that students areadults and they need privacy¹. Others hold that students shouldn't rent a flatbecause most collegians can’t support themselves economically. Well, for myopinion, I don’t think students should rent a flat when they are in college.

对于许多的大学生来说，他们更倾向于在大学期间在外面租房子住，为了能够得到更多的私人空间。这种现象引起了很多人的关注。一些人支持这些学生的做法，他们认为大学生已经成年，需要有自己的隐私。一些人认为学生不应该租房住，因为学生不能够在经济上独立。在我看来，我也认为学生在校期间不应该在外面租房住。

Firstly, Living in dormitory is safer thanliving in a rented flat. Comparing to the other community, college is arelatively safe place because people are not so complex in college than peopleoutside the college. So it is a better place for students to living on campusthan stay in a rented flat.

首先，住在学校里比住在外面更安全。与其他的社区相比，大学里面的人往往不像外面的人那么复杂。因此，对于学生来说，住在学校比住在外面更好。

Secondly, stay in college can save money.As collegians, they don’t have jobs to support themselves, so they should tryto save money and stay in dormitory instead of spending money on renting aflat.

其次，在学校住可以省钱。对于大学生来说，他们没有工作，不能养活自己，所以，他们应该住在学校，不应该住在外面，以此来节省房租开支。

Thirdly, living on campus² can save lots oftime to study. Students living in college don’t have to run back and forthbetween college and a rented apartment. Therefore, they can have more time tostudy.

最后，住在学校里可以腾出更多的时间来学习。学生住在学校里，就不用老是在学校和公寓间来回跑。因此，他们能够更多的时间来学习。

From the above reasons, we can concludethat living on campus would be a priority³ to students for the benefits ofkeeping themselves safe, saving⁴ a big amount of money and time.

鉴于以上的原因，学生应该首先选择住在学校，不仅能让自己更加安全，而且也能节省很多的金钱和时间。